Comments on: To Be Longing For – By Mark Patrick

By: Mark Patrick

Mark Patrick — Sat, 23 Jan 2010 10:38:18 +0000

Thank you Walt and Nikita! With each new story that I write, I try a different style. Some work, some don’t. I felt good about this story when I finished it, so I am happy that it has been well received. Thanks again for the comments.

By: Nikita

Nikita — Wed, 06 Jan 2010 15:48:39 +0000

Awesome! Very well written and beautiful use of words, almost poetic in it’s form. Reading such a good piece after such a long time makes you wonder where you get the inspiration from. Carry on the good work!!

By: Walt Giersbach

Walt Giersbach — Mon, 04 Jan 2010 17:04:51 +0000

Mark, this is so enjoyable–an entire story built on interior monologue, on the nuances between reader and writer. And, yes, after 1,000 pages I forget what the first 500 were about. Five stars!