Holy Liftoff – By Elaine Medline

Cynthia swung a screwdriver.

“What are you doing with that?” her mother asked her.

“Fixing Gemini.”

Gemini was the name that Cynthia had given to her new bicycle, a Stingray Deluxe. The girl was thrilled with the glitter banana seat and monkey bars, but had wanted the copper color. All they had in stock was violet.

“What’s wrong with Gemini?” Joan asked.

“It’s purple, first of all,” her daughter answered. “Plus I don’t like the fenders and chain guard. I ripped them off for liftoff.”

“Cynthia, it was your birthday present.”

Her son, Thomas, shuffled into the kitchen backward. He asked her what she was doing.

“Beating egg whites for a pie,” she said, proudly holding up her new kitchen tool, a wire whisk.

“Holy smell, what’s this? Clue me in.”

Holy this, holy that. Batman was taking over his little mind.

“With the crackers? Cheese.”

“Cheese didn’t smell before,” he said, exiting backward. “And it used to be orange.”

Joan could hear the serious voice of a newsman on their television in the next room. She didn’t want Thomas or Cynthia to hear it, so she turned it off. The news started getting bad around 1961, and that was five years ago.

While Joan was trussing the chicken, Thomas returned to the kitchen, this time in a forward direction, upset and talking fast. “Cynthia says she’s gonna ride her bike straight up the garage,” he said. “All the kids are coming to watch.”

“What do you mean, ride her bike up the garage?”

“Straight up the garage door,” he answered. “All the way to the roof.”

Joan panicked inside. It wasn’t physically possible to ride right up a garage door. But she could understand why a person would try. She continued working on the chicken, tying knots, thinking.

“Well, aren’t you going to stop her?” Thomas demanded. “She says she’s going to do a wheelie, then pedal like crazy to the top.”

Of course I’ll have to stop her, Joan thought. Even if her daughter managed to gain the momentum to accomplish her ridiculous goal, she’d still have to fall. In fact, the more successful her launch, the harder her fall.

“When is she going to do it?” she asked her son.

“Soon, maybe now. Hurry, or she’ll die.”

Joan rinsed the grease off her hands and rushed to the living room, which had a view to the front. She lifted the windowpane. True enough, half the neighbourhood youngsters had gathered on the street in a semi-circle. The children were clapping in unison and rhythmically shouting her daughter’s name.

Opening her mouth to stop the spectacle, Joan changed her mind. She said nothing. She reasoned it out. If Cynthia didn’t try riding her bike up the garage, the next escapade could be more ambitious. Cynthia had a wild air about her, as if she would one day take up the guitar, or dance naked at Berkeley. Children had to learn their lessons, painful as they were. Joan wondered how her husband John would handle this.

John’s not here, he’s away at war, he’s not coming home anytime soon. Handle it yourself, she disciplined herself. She fetched the first aid kit. There would likely be blood, so she readied the bandages and iodine.

The children had stopped shouting. The air smelled like crab apples. A wind shook the tree in their front yard, and chestnuts lightly thudded the pavement. The chestnuts, they reminded Joan of the B-52 bombs. Cynthia walked her bike out to the middle of the street, and the kids parted to make way for her. Now facing the garage, she edged herself backward to get a better run of it.

She closed her eyes and pursed her lips. Her hands revved the grips like she was on a motorcycle. She lifted her left foot from the asphalt and set it on the pedal. Then she picked up her right foot and pedalled like the devil. Her body ascended from the bike seat. Her legs reeled. Her hair rose. Just before she hit the garage, she pulled up her front wheel.

And her mother watched, fascinated.

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Elaine Medline is the author of the young adult novel That Silent Summer, published by Scholastic Canada in 1999. Elaine has also written two stories recently published in the online journal Salt River Review. She was previously a medical reporter for the Ottawa Citizen newspaper, and is now involved in health-care policy.

11 Comments
  1. Reply
    Margaret Hollett
    March 23, 2009 at 3:16 pm

    Great story. You know something is good when you want it to keep going.

  2. Reply
    Nancy Peterson
    March 23, 2009 at 5:28 pm

    Hi Elaine – nice piece!! reminds me of you and I go-carting on Tambark with the gold shag carpet. No helmuts back then eh 🙂

  3. Reply
    Roy
    March 23, 2009 at 7:39 pm

    Well What happened?!?!?! Excellent story, really help bring back memories of my childhood escapades!!

  4. Reply
    RhEAL
    March 24, 2009 at 4:08 pm

    …the brief details helped create a unique character (one that varies for everyone who reads i’m sure…) The variety of detail you have creatively plugged-in captured an image in my mind probably based on my own childhood experiences. Funny!
    Great work Elaine!

  5. Reply
    Grace Rudolph
    March 25, 2009 at 9:01 am

    Super story. So much fun. Brought back childhood memories. Thanks.
    Grace

  6. Reply
    mike
    March 25, 2009 at 11:33 am

    A wonderful examination of determination and hope. Beautifully crafted. Bravo!

  7. Reply
    Jane
    March 25, 2009 at 11:42 am

    Thought you really nailed the character of the mother. Could totally see this as a play. Thanks for sharing your always enjoyable writing!

  8. Reply
    Simone
    March 28, 2009 at 6:41 pm

    You are such an amazing writer. Loved it! Thanks for sending it to me!

  9. Reply
    Marg
    March 29, 2009 at 1:48 pm

    Glad I found this story. It was fun to read and brings back memories of how I got some of my scars! Keep writing.

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    Lani
    March 31, 2009 at 9:06 am

    What a wise Mom. You nailed her alright.

    Nice story. I remember that bike and riding the neighborhood. I remember chanting for the neighborhood daredevil.
    I hope to read more of your work

  11. Reply
    Elaine Medline
    April 3, 2009 at 8:40 pm

    Thanks to everyone above for checking in with some really nice comments. How does it end? I think when the mother makes the decision to let her daughter go through with it, that’s the ending really. Never personally owned a Stingray Deluxe bike, but researched the 1966 model it so that the colors and parts were accurate. Was waiting for someone to comment on the background of war in contrast with the suburban ’safety’ zone. Casey, Short Story Library is a beautifully designed site; I feel honoured to be part of it. New online: my story The Atmosphere is Blue, just published by Foliate Oak in its April , 2009 edition. Now working on a new one that takes place in 1939, a tense and interesting year. Will struggle with it tomorrow, if only I can get beyond that blank screen.

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