Comments on: Apostate Blues – By Jordan Eudy http://shortstory.us.com/2009/01/apostate-blues-%e2%80%93-by-jordan-eudy/ Free Online Magazine - Poetry, Micro Fiction, Flash Fiction and Short Stories Sat, 04 Sep 2010 13:37:29 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: Bob Burnett http://shortstory.us.com/2009/01/apostate-blues-%e2%80%93-by-jordan-eudy/comment-page-1/#comment-15655 Bob Burnett Fri, 30 Jan 2009 16:41:17 +0000 http://shortstory.us.com/?p=279#comment-15655 Wonderful - best word I have, but it is inadequate. Wonderful – best word I have, but it is inadequate.

]]> By: Lavonna Eudy http://shortstory.us.com/2009/01/apostate-blues-%e2%80%93-by-jordan-eudy/comment-page-1/#comment-15410 Lavonna Eudy Tue, 27 Jan 2009 02:25:54 +0000 http://shortstory.us.com/?p=279#comment-15410 Great story! I had not read this one before. I've always heard that authors write what they know, drawing from their own personal experiences and their individual family history. I never doubted that but this is the first time I've ever seen it in action. Seeing as how it is also MY family history, reading it gave me the feeling of familiarity and comfort. Congratulations on a job well done! Mom Great story! I had not read this one before. I’ve always heard that authors write what they know, drawing from their own personal experiences and their individual family history. I never doubted that but this is the first time I’ve ever seen it in action. Seeing as how it is also MY family history, reading it gave me the feeling of familiarity and comfort.

Congratulations on a job well done!
Mom

]]> By: Amber http://shortstory.us.com/2009/01/apostate-blues-%e2%80%93-by-jordan-eudy/comment-page-1/#comment-15369 Amber Mon, 26 Jan 2009 19:20:33 +0000 http://shortstory.us.com/?p=279#comment-15369 I really like this story! One thing in particular - flashbacks can be annoying when not handled well These were great since the reader didn't forgot where they were in the story and they added to the present. I really like this story! One thing in particular – flashbacks can be annoying when not handled well These were great since the reader didn’t forgot where they were in the story and they added to the present.

]]> By: Gray http://shortstory.us.com/2009/01/apostate-blues-%e2%80%93-by-jordan-eudy/comment-page-1/#comment-15284 Gray Mon, 26 Jan 2009 04:51:09 +0000 http://shortstory.us.com/?p=279#comment-15284 Perfectly written, almost every line. I thought so the first time I read it and reading it again, after this much time, I still think so. Very enjoyable (again). Perfectly written, almost every line. I thought so the first time I read it and reading it again, after this much time, I still think so. Very enjoyable (again).

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