http://shortstory.us.com/2008/10/the-cost-of-a-baby-by-yolande-pienaar/ Free Online Magazine - Poetry, Micro Fiction, Flash Fiction and Short Stories Wed, 10 Mar 2010 17:48:09 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 http://shortstory.us.com/2008/10/the-cost-of-a-baby-by-yolande-pienaar/comment-page-1/#comment-15283 Ryan Sayles Mon, 26 Jan 2009 04:35:26 +0000 http://shortstory.us.com/?p=185#comment-15283 The harm to herself and the reasoning behind it I like better than figuring she had hurt the baby. It makes the story much better. The harm to herself and the reasoning behind it I like better than figuring she had hurt the baby. It makes the story much better.

]]> http://shortstory.us.com/2008/10/the-cost-of-a-baby-by-yolande-pienaar/comment-page-1/#comment-10374 Diana Jay Tue, 16 Dec 2008 15:02:26 +0000 http://shortstory.us.com/?p=185#comment-10374 My first thoughts were 'shock, horror, nightmare...' Thank you for a great, gripping story. More please. My first thoughts were ’shock, horror, nightmare…’ Thank you for a great, gripping story. More please.

]]> http://shortstory.us.com/2008/10/the-cost-of-a-baby-by-yolande-pienaar/comment-page-1/#comment-5985 Chris Tue, 04 Nov 2008 02:21:35 +0000 http://shortstory.us.com/?p=185#comment-5985 This is a disturbing, brilliant piece! Completely gripping, well done! This is a disturbing, brilliant piece! Completely gripping, well done!

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